On Writing

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    Thoughts on Veronica Mars and more …

    As I was reading the Veronica Mars essay book, I started thinking about my own books, specifically the Assassin urban fantasy series that I’m working on right now.

    The Assassin book, titled Gin on the Rocks, is about Gin Blanco, an assassin who moonlights (daylights?) as a cook at a barbecue restaurant called the Pork Pit. When Gin is double-crossed during a job and her mentor/handler is murdered, she goes looking for the people responsible.

    Why did the VM book make me think about Gin? Because it made me realize I’m writing a form of Southern noir. VM, of course, is California noir, with movie stars and millionaires and the ocean. My book? Well, it’s set in a fictional city called Ashland, which sprawls over the spot where Tennessee, North Carolina, and Virginia meet. Instead of a California landscape, I’ve got barbecue joints and debutantes and antebellum mansions. And corruption, of course. It’s not noir, unless there’s corruption. 😎

    The essay book also made me think about other similarities between VM and Gin — and why I like VM so much. Both feature strong heroines with troubled pasts. Veronica’s friend was murdered; Gin’s family was murdered when she was 13. Veronica wants justice for herself and Lilly; Gin wants justice for herself and her mentor.

    Don’t get me wrong. My book isn’t a VM rip-off. Quite the opposite. My book has magic and giants and dwarves and runes. I wasn’t even thinking about or watching VM when I wrote it. And Gin is very, very different from Veronica. For one thing, she prefers to kill first and ask questions later.

    But the essay book really made me think about and examine what elements appear in VM and my own books. What sort of themes I use over and over. The big stuff, so to speak.

    A strong heroine is a must for me, whether I’m the author or the reader. I hate silly, weak characters, especially ditzy women who can’t take care of themselves. As far as getting revenge or justice, it’s a great way to motivate your character and drive your plot. Carmen Cole, anyone? 😎

    I also like using symbols and symmetry. Often, my characters end up in the same place they started out from, albeit with a completely different perspective. Like Karma Girl opening with Carmen’s wedding — and Hot Mama doing the same.

    And I really enjoy giving my characters little quirks, like Carmen always wearing jeans and cutesy T-shirts. Or Fiona Fine eating everything in sight and wearing zebra stripes with hot-pink polka dots.

    As far as the Assassin book goes, Gin almost always wears long sleeves (the better to hide her knives). Gin also loves to cook, so most of her shirts have some sort of food item on them, like blackberries or tomatoes or key limes. She’s also enjoys watching the Food Network, and she shows her love for the few people she cares about by cooking for them.

    Okay, I’ve rambled long enough for one post. What are some of the things you enjoy about VM, the Bigtime books, or your own writing? What kind of themes and characters do you like to see? Share in the comments.

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    Hot Mama once more …

    mama_rough.jpgSybil and the other folks over at The Good, the Bad, and the Unread have been kind enough to do a fresh review of Hot Mama, in anticipation of the mass market paperback release on Aug. 5 — this upcoming Tuesday. Can you believe it?

    It seems like just yesterday the trade paperback version was coming out. But here we are, several months later already. Kids are already going back to school in my part of the woods, which means summer is almost over. Shaking head.

    In other news, there will be some excerpts from Jinx and some other info posted on TGTBTU sometime soon. So keep an eye out for that.

    And if you missed Hot Mama the first time around, I hope you can check it and the other books out — and get sucked into the zany, campy world of Bigtime, N.Y. :ww:

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    ‘Tis done … for now …

    So I finished the rough draft of Assassin 2 yesterday. Huzzah! 😎

    It clocks in at 86,000 words and change, and 35 chapters. By a rough draft, I do mean rough. My dialogue is stilted, my descriptions are boring, and the chapters get progressively shorter as they go along. Seriously, right now the last chapter isn’t even 1,000 words long (most of my chapters are at least 3,000 words). 

    Plus, my ending really sucks since I can’t exactly decide what to do with this one character. Should she be a cop? Thief? Another assassin? I’m still thinking about that.

    But there’s sex and violence and lots of bad guys who get what’s coming to them. Even better, I’ve got most of the story down. Now, I have something to work with, instead of just a blank screen mocking me. Usually for me, it’s easier to revise and edit than write something from scratch.

    But it’s done, and I’m taking a break this weekend. Wheezley and I will probably go see Hellboy 2 at some point, and A-Team DVDs and TBR pile, here I come! :ww:

    What about you guys? Anyone got big plans this weekend?

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    Wish list …

    I’ve often wished for bionic wrists when pounding out my latest rough draft, including now while I’m working on Assassin 2. I wouldn’t mind having a color laser printer, either. 😎

    My aching wrist got me to thinking about what other writers wish for. I’m sure being able to quit your day job or hitting a list is on many writers’ wish lists (mine included). But what other things do folks long for? A new computer? Cool office gadgets? More writing time?

    And what do readers wish for? More books by a favorite author? Discovering a great new writer? Cool reading gadgets?

    Leave a comment and tell me what’s on your wish list. You already know what’s on mine. Na-na-na! :ww:

  • Words, words everywhere …

    So I wrote 17,866 words on Assassin 2 this weekend. I was able to salvage some stuff (mainly description) from my first rough draft so they weren’t all original words.

    But still, I got a lot done. I’m up to about 70,000 craptastic words, and I can see the glimmer of the end.

    Right now though, I seriously need some ice for my wrist … 😮