• 931 and counting …

    Finished The Way of Shadows by Brent Weeks. This is the first book in his epic fantasy, Night Angel trilogy about an orphan-turned-assassin named Azoth/Kylar.

    Azoth knows that life on the streets is hard and dangerous. So to protect his friends, Doll Girl and Jarl, and himself, Azoth decides to become an apprentice to the best wetboy (aka assassin) in the city — Durzo Blint. The years pass, and Azoth slowly takes on the persona of Kylar Stern, a respected, but relatively poor noble. But war is brewing, and Kylar will have to decide who he wants to save — his friends or Durzo. Because someone’s going to die …

    First of all, let me say that this book has one of the best covers I’ve seen in a long time. Seriously, go look at it on Amazon. It’s beautiful. Whoever does the Orbit book covers really knows that they’re doing. I like a lot of their covers.

    Back to the book. I picked this one up because I write a series about an assassin, and I’m always curious how other people write assassin characters.

    I liked a lot of things about this book. Weeks doesn’t shy away from showing the horrors of being an orphan living on the streets (rapes, beatings, constant hunger), and he doesn’t make the wetboy business a glamorous one either. This is probably one of the grittiest fantasies I’ve read in a while, but it fit the story well.

    I also enjoyed the characters — Azoth/Kylar, Durzo, Momma K, Jarl. Each one has a unique point of view and acts just the way that you’d expect them to, given their various situations. Momma K was especially a favorite of mine.

    But there were just as many things that I didn’t like about the book — especially when it came to the execution of the world building. This is an epic fantasy, but there isn’t as much magic in this book as you might expect. Wetboys have “Talents” that let them hide in shadows, climb walls, etc. But why someone has Talent, how it forms, etc. wasn’t really explained very well. Neither were the magical artifacts (they have a name, but it escapes me at the moment) that several people were after in the book. And I never did quite grasp what the Night Angels are — Ideals? Gods? Something else entirely?

    Also, I didn’t get a real sense of the various countries/peoples. There are four or five characters (including a seer) who just popped in and out of the book at random with no real explanation about their motivation or why they would even care what’s happening in another country.

    I think a glossary of terms would have really helped when it came to explaining the magic, the peoples, and the countries. 

    Weeks has some really nice twists near the end, especially in regards to who and what Durzo really is, but I didn’t think he brought out the backstory/reasons for them enough earlier in the book. The references were a little obscure for me, just like the magic was.

    Despite the problems I had, I’m still going to give this one a thumbs up. The characters were interesting, and Weeks leaves you with a cliffhanger that makes you want to keep reading. Overall, if you’re in the mood for an epic fantasy, you might try this one.

    Up next: Night and Day by Robert B. Parker.

    Books in my TBR pile: About 20.

  • The tax man cometh …

    So I mailed my taxes in over the weekend. Painful, as always. Self-employment tax, which authors have to pay, really, really sucks. 👿

    I also have a day job, which is in a different state from where I live. And wouldn’t you know it, but the state that I work in has a state income tax. This year, I had to send them a check for $9.

    Evidently, all the money that the state takes out of my paycheck during the year isn’t enough to cover the state income tax. No, they need $9 more. Sigh … :rolleyes:

  • ‘Tis done … for now …

    So I’ve finished my first draft of my young-adult fantasy, Quiver. Word count: 62,241. If I was writing one of the Elemental Assassin books, I’d need about 30,000 more words. But I think 62K is a good start for a YA. I’m thinking the final book will be between 70-75K.

    After about six false starts, I finally think I’ve nailed down how I want the story to go. My main character, Gwen, is sort of a Scarlet Pimpernel meets Robin Hood type. With magic. Here is something resembling a blurb:

    After her father’s murder, Gwen Frost has taken up his legacy as the Hood, an outlaw who haunts the forests around the capitol city of Cadogan. Gwen has a Talent or magic for sight, which has led her to become one of the best archers in all the Thirteen Kingdoms. By day, Gwen robs the corrupt nobles who travel through the forest and gives their money to those who need it. At night, she masquerades as Lady Gwendolyn, a spoiled, wannabe princess who seems to care for nothing but spending her inheritance on her extravagant wardrobe as fast as she can.

    But when Gwen inadvertantly thwarts on assassination attempt on Prince Percy St. John, she finds herself working to stop a scheme that threatens the entire kingdom — and vows to finally bring her father’s killer to justice …

    I don’t know why this draft was so hard for me to write. Maybe because I’ve never written a YA before, so I was unsure about the voice. Maybe because my first plot sucked out loud. Maybe because it’s been winter, and I’ve just felt sluggish and lazy.

    Anyway, here’s the first chapter for your reading enjoyment. (And please excuse the formatting if it is wonky or if there’s a word or two missing. I had to go through and delete all the code, and I just never know what WordPress is going to do to the type until I hit post). Happy reading! :ww:

    QUIVER — CHAPTER ONE

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  • Smooth-Talking Stranger …

    So the folks over at Dear Author and Smart Bitches are doing another Save the Contemporary book campaign, this time for Smooth-Talking Stranger by Lisa Kleypas. There are free books to be had, so go on over and check out how you can enter and help spread the word. 😉

    Now, I don’t keep a lot of books (simply because I don’t have room) and I don’t re-read that many books either, but Kleypas’ other two contemporaries, Sugar Daddy and Blue-Eyed Devil, are two books that have gone up on my keeper shelf and that I will re-read. The voice, the stories, the characters, the simple elegance of the writing — I loved both of them. Sugar Daddy was my favorite read of 2008, and so far, Blue-Eyed Devil is my best read of 2009.

    Kleypas makes me want to write my own contemporary. To me, that’s the mark of a great book — it gets me excited about reading more and even writing in that genre.

    And what’s even better is I gave Sugar Daddy and Blue-Eyed Devil to my mom. She’s really picky about what she reads. She doesn’t like historicals (except for westerns), and she doesn’t like paranormal. But she loved these books just as much as I did. We had a lot of fun talking about them, and we’re both looking forward to Smooth-Talking Stranger. We’ll probably be fighting over who gets to read it first …