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Finished Your Mouth Drives Me Crazy by HelenKay Dimon.

This is a contemporary romance about Annie Parks, a photographer who goes to Hawaii to settle a score and ends up getting tossed off a yacht. Lucky for Annie, she’s rescued by sexy police chief Kane Travers.

I read a lot of urban fantasy and paranormal romance, so this contemporary was a nice change of pace. Con men, drug dealers, double-crosses … this book has its fair share of action. Dimon also has some snappy dialogue between her two main characters, and she really gives you a feel for the tropical setting. Who knew there were wild chickens in Hawaii? Not me.

But one quibble I had with the book is the beginning, where Kane handcuffs Annie to his bed. Not exactly how I would expect a law-enforcement official to act when confronted with a strange woman claiming to have amnesia. If I’d been Annie, I would have brained him over the head with a lamp and been screaming police brutality at the top of my lungs. I get that Kane is curious and overprotective, but this whole scene grated on my nerves. It’s the sort of alpha-male behavior I just don’t like.

Still, if you’re looking for something light and breezy, you’ll probably like this one. Thumbs up.

BTW, HelenKay has a cool blog where she talks about writing. Go check it out.

Up next: My Big Fat Supernatural Wedding anthology.

5 Comments

  1. This book looks like fun, it is nice to have a light read. I’m reading Overheard by Maya Banks and it has some light banter between characters.

    Hugs, Danette

  2. Thank you!!

    Sorry the beginning didn’t work for you. Kane knew she was lying and just want to hold her there (not let her run) while he changed closed, but I can see where it would seem overly alpha. Very happy you kept reading! :biggrin:

  3. Hi, HelenKay. No problemo. I enjoyed the book. 😎

    I really like the very beginning where he finds her on the beach. That was a great hook to get people into the story. And I get what Kane was doing by keeping her close by.

    I also liked Annie’s obsession with building pyramids out of sweetener packets. That was a nice touch to show how she’s always thinking and planning ahead.

    It’s probably just me. I’m not a big fan of alpha characters — or characters who do alpha things. It makes my Spidey sense tingle — and not in a good way. Like in J.R. Ward’s books. As much as I like her characters/world, every time one of the vamps goes all possessive over his lady, I want to reach into the book and punch them. :hulk:

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