Year: 2008

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    The great blue middle …

    I spent most of my holiday weekend working on the second draft of Assassin 2. I wrote 8,869 words and now have about 82,000 total. I managed to move from chapter 13 all the way up to chapter 21. Only about 10 chapters to go. The end is almost in sight.

    Unfortunately, this is always the hardest part for me. The closer I get to the end, the more difficult it is to make myself sit down in front of the computer. Because I’ve been working on this for weeks now and I just want to finish. I want to do other things, like finish the book I’m reading, clean off my desk, and just mindlessly sit in front of the television for an hour without feeling guilty that I’m not doing book stuff.

    But I’ve still got those 10 chapters and 20,000 words to go. Ugh. I don’t like it, but I’ll make myself keep plugging along, even if it’s only for an hour at a time. Still, ugh. :hulk:

    What about you? When do you hit the wall in your writing?

  • Summer’s here …

    I hope everyone has a safe and fun holiday weekend. Eat some burgers, watch some sports, cruise on the lake, and take a moment to remember all those brave men and women who have served and sacrificed in the line of duty for our country.

    Me? I’ll be in the Bat Cave most of the weekend, working on Assassin 2. I’m up to chapter twelve (out of thirty or so) on the second draft. Not quite halfway done, but I’ve got 72,801 words and slowly creeping up.

    Happy Memorial Day! :ww:

  • Sports, anyone …

    So the French Open tennis tournament starts this weekend. I know it’s weird, but I really like to watch tennis. It’s one of the purest sports out there, with two people facing off over a net. Man to man, woman to woman. Plus, it’s great to nap to, which I’ll probably be doing a little of this Memorial Day weekend. :scooby:

    It’s also a big weekend for Formula One racing, with the Grand Prix being held in Monaco. Wheezley, the significant other, is a big F1 fan (his cat is even named McLaren, after the racing team), so I’ve become a casual follower of the sport.

    All the good stuff on television this weekend almost makes me forget that it’s another three months until football starts again. Almost. 😎

    What about you? Got big plans for the holiday weekend?

  • 876 and counting …

    Finished The 47th Samurai by Stephen Hunter. This book is part of Hunter’s saga about the Swagger family from Arkansas, including Earl (the World War II hero dad) and Bob Lee (his son and a Vietnam-era sniper).

    This book focuses on Bob Lee, who’s now in his sixties and has retired to Idaho where he’s building a house for his wife. One day, a Japanese man, Philip Yano, shows up on Bob Lee’s land asking about a sword that Bob’s father, Earl, might have brought back from from Iwo Jima. Bob Lee eventually tracks down the sword and returns it to Yano in Japan — but soon after, Yano and his family are brutually murdered. So Bob Lee goes all samurai and returns to Japan, determined to track down the sword and kill the men who murdered Yano and his family.

    Samurai follows a predictable thriller formula, as Bob Lee bcomes a one-man killing machine roaming through Japan. Nothing wrong with that, but I expected a few more twists than I got (although there is one character whose motivations came as a complete surprise at the end).

    Hunter gives the reader a lot of info about Japan, swords, and the samurai tradition. You can tell he did extensive research (and I also know because I work with his daugther, who mentioned it to me). If you like swords or want to learn more about the samurai tradition, this book contains a wealth of information about both. 

    But one thing that drove me crazy was the dialogue. Hunter doesn’t put any tags in his dialogue (like “Bob said”), so it was hard to tell who was speaking. A couple of times, I had to go back up and count down the lines to see who was talking. Very annoying. Also, Bob Lee’s speech was a little more aw-shucks and country than I remember from previous books.

    Samurai isn’t the best Bob Lee book. (That would be the first book, Point of Impact, a truly great thriller read.) But even a lesser Bob Lee book is better than most. So thumbs up.

    Up next: Night Life by Caitlin Kittredge.

  • 875 and counting …

    Finished Dead Man Rising by Lilith Saintcrow. This is the second in Saintcrow’s urban fantasy series about Dante Valentine, a nercomance who raises people from the dead. Be warned: there are some spoilers ahead.

    In this one, Danny’s mourning the loss of her demon lover Japhrimel (from book one, Working for the Devil). But she doesn’t have time to grieve long. Her friend Gabe asks Danny to help her with a series of brutal murders, all of which lead back to Rigger Hall, the school where Danny and other students were horribly abused as children.

    This book was quite a bit darker than the first one, much more so than I expected. Poor Danny’s about to snap from grief over losing Japhrimel already, and then she has to confront the horrors of her childhood. Not a light read at all. 

    Still, Danny is a very likable character as she tries to work through her grief and adjust to her new demon-enhanced body. She gets a little whiny toward the end of the book, but she does have a lot to deal with. And once again, I enjoyed Saintcrow’s blend of magic and technology. (Plus, there was a glossary of terms in this book. Yeah!)

    But overall, I didn’t enjoy this one quite as much as the first book for one reason — Japhrimel. Although Dante thinks about him constantly, the demon doesn’t show up until the last few chapters of the book. His appearance reminded me just how much I liked him in the first book — and how this book suffers from his absense. (Jace is just not a good substitute for the demon, which Dante and the reader quickly realize.)

    But I get that Japhrimel’s resurrection was part of the climax and not the middle arc of the story. Still, if you’re a Japh fan like me, this book ends much better than the first one. 😎

    Overall, if you’re looking for a dark urban fantasy read, give Dead Man Rising and the rest of the Dante Valentine series a try. Thumbs up.

    Up next: The 47th Samurai by Stephen Hunter.